Monday, July 13, 2009

Poem: My Spotted Socks

writted 7/13/09
critique welcome.

Threaded with pink
and white
and a tiny bit of orange.

Thoroughly worn
and loved
and torn at the toes a little.

They don't exactly keep my feet warm,
But as long as I can look at my spotted socks
I almost don't mind being cold.


Priya said...

Awww, that's cute. I don't really have any critique -- I like it this way, short and sweet.

Emily Ruth said...

thanks priya! :)

GirlwiththeBraids said...

That is so cute! I'm just thinking about the cover of A Crooked Kind of Perfect. I also have no critique, if that's okay. Just wanted to share my enthusiasm! :)

Emily Ruth said...

that's more than okay! :) enthusiasm is just as wonderful to hear

thank you so, so much...

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